Establishing shot
Mr Klein a 67 year old former sergeant walks through the school gates with a large briefcase and also wearing corduroy trousers ,bright statement tie and all the medals he got on his grey blazer.
Mr Klein is Marching through the corridor as if he was still in the army. students make there way to school whilst Mr Klein mysteriously making his entrance through the schools gates. Students find there opportunity to traumatize Mr Klein by verbally abusing him.
JACOB
Look at this new prick i think hes going to be our new teacher
SAM
I know yeah the standard of teachers have dropped
whilst Mr Klein tries to ignore the ignorant comments, they try and provoke him by throwing stuff at him.
2.INT.SCHOOL CORRIDOR/ .MORNING
Bell goes for first period and the corridors are deserted. Mr Klein the new teacher finally finds his way to his class after being teased for being creepy.He enters the room and discovers all the sharp equipment laying around and it puts a creepy grin back on his face.
3.INT. SCHOOL.AFTERNOON
Mr Klein's first class arrive and he introduces himself
MR KLEIN
Greetings my name is Mr Klein and I am going to be your new Design and technology teacher
he said this as if he had a cold and the students burst out laughing.
MR KLEIN (WHISPERS)If only you knew who i was.
4. INT. CORRIDOR.AFTERNOON
Mr Klein steps back away from the two children ,who are pressed against the wall, and takes a gun out of his inside pocket and aims cautiously at Jacobs head , pulls the trigger and walks away.
Sam and Jacob are together in the corridor about to smoke a joint.
Mr Klein is heading towards the two teenagers and takes Jacob by the neck forcing him against the wall and whispers to him MR KLEIN
shouldn't have made any assumptions about me because you obviously don't know what I am capable of.
Mr Klein steps back away from the two children ,who are pressed against the wall, and takes a gun out of his inside pocket and aims cautiously at Jacobs head , pulls the trigger and walks away.
PLOT
A serial killer with a brain disorder, who also escaped from 3 of the most toughest jails in England. As the most wanted fugitive he goes undercover as a school teacher.working side by side next to kids he keeps his character and has everyone fooled.
All his life he has been on the news for committing the most shocking crimes.
A really good start here but this is unfinished. We need a couple more scenes to make this a complete script. Is this leading up to a murder? You need Mr Klein to show his true colours somehow; even if only the viewers find out what happens.
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